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poem by fire

FIRE
11 posts
Jun 09, 2009
12:26 AM
Narcissus Waltz

We have tried so very hard,
To find whom needs to be,
To let us equally survive,
Though there’s really only me…


One head, one heart, one carcass too,
Yet wants will often differ,
For fluid are our feelings now,
When we listen to us bicker…


I must crush the ideas yes,
For they lead to desire,
A pain potent calls once again,
Emotion sent through fire…

ya, thats mine,

fire

Last Edited on 9-Jun-2009 12:27 AM

Ocam
20 posts
Jun 10, 2009
11:20 AM
Wow Fire,
There are some pretty powerful images in this. Thank you for sharing it.
Ocam
suzy schnotlocker
15 posts
Jun 11, 2009
9:56 AM
Hey Fire!
I love your poems! wish you would send me more of your work. Hope everything is ok for you. I havent had the pleasure of chatting with you in ages. I miss you!
A freind always!
Suzy
Hydra
145 posts
Jun 14, 2009
9:14 AM
Very nice write! I like the wording and the flow to this poem.